Tiered Haiku – Inspired by The Brown Bag Special

5-7-5
Bury me standing
so that I may see clearly
which way I should rise

3-5-3
Revenge is
on my vengeful mind
I’m rising

2-3-2
Go on
try to hide
yourself

1-2-1
I’ll
always
know

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15 thoughts on “Tiered Haiku – Inspired by The Brown Bag Special

  1. I only knew and thought that the traditional structure was 5-7-5, then I read other poets and found out that nobody used that structure that there where always more syllables, and now I find out that there are other structures? That´s why I call this wordpress thing my free online university.

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  2. I love what you’ve created. It is in the truest essence of what I imagined when tinkering with the puzzle pieces that became tiered haiku. I hope enjoy, and don’t forget to link to my blog in the future! Have a wonderful day. Now get out there and write!!!

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